I. Love. This! I've read it through five times now, and it's still sweet and magical. Just what I wanted to see between the two of them.
I love the gentleness in these tough characters as they're still sort of new in their relationship (or at least sharing their relationship with others). The touches were all beautiful--even the little things like knees bumping. But I love Neville applying a healing touch; it's so sensual and sweet. Great description throughout. Most of all, I loved all the little nods to their pasts--what they're willing to talk about & when, how Charlie views the scars, etc. Beautifully and carefully written.
And I am especially thrilled with the reason for the distraction that contributed to the accident. And the comment about the timing and having them all distract each other. heeheee! Brilliant!
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on 2010-02-09 07:36 pm (UTC)I love the gentleness in these tough characters as they're still sort of new in their relationship (or at least sharing their relationship with others). The touches were all beautiful--even the little things like knees bumping. But I love Neville applying a healing touch; it's so sensual and sweet. Great description throughout. Most of all, I loved all the little nods to their pasts--what they're willing to talk about & when, how Charlie views the scars, etc. Beautifully and carefully written.
And I am especially thrilled with the reason for the distraction that contributed to the accident. And the comment about the timing and having them all distract each other. heeheee! Brilliant!
Thank you for writing such a fantastic fic!